Alpha Strike: [An interstellar Weapon Platform’s Guide to being a Dungeon Core] (Book 2 title)

Hey every! Just wanted to make quick news post and let you know I'm looking for volunteer Beta Readers for my upcoming novel, "We Lease The Kraken!"

 

We're already 23 chapters into the story on Patreon and I'm looking for feedback on the story and how the its progressing.

I'll make this short and sweet.

 

What am I looking for?

 

5 Beta Readers (possibly more later) to help review and critique the story, two times a week with the post of each new chapter.

I'm looking for people with an eye for detail, who enjoy picking stories apart and feel like they're good at finding plot holes, problems and contradictions in stories.

 

People who can help buff out the rough places, and even shape the direction the story might take.

 

Does this skill mess with another one in a bad way? Does this creature not make sense in the context? Did that plot twist feel like it came out of the blue with no build up? Does the story feel like its dragging on without going anywhere?

That kind of thing.

 

Beta Readers will be given access to a Google Folder with each chapter, past and future, were they can make comments, add suggestions and discuss things with other Beta Readers.

 

While I'm NOT expecting a detailed description of every problem you find (though you're free too, hahaha!) Beta Readers are expected to

make a effort to really critique each chapter and conciser them in context of the entire narrative.

 

In return, Beta Readers will get access to advance chapters of "We Lease The Kraken" at no charge, up to the highest Patreon tier. (Currently set to Adventurer, but will be bumped to Field Commander during public release).

 

Beta Readers will also get the chance to help shape the story by suggesting cool items, Beasts and minor characters they think might fit well.

I know this is a lot to ask, but this request is really targeted toward a very specific type of reader. If you feel that's not your thing,, I totally understand and there's no hard feelings .

 

If this DOES feel like something you'd be interested in doing, then send me a message either here or on Royal Road, and I'll message you with more details.

 

Thanks for your time and good luck!