Danmachi: the Great Devourer

Chapter 163: C163: Goddess of The Sun



C163: Goddess of The Sun

Alt Title Teaser: Fake

First off, I'd like to apologize in regards to the power stone thing from the last chapter. I forgot about Sunday's reset. So ill just give you a few bits of story about the ideas I had even though we didn't reach the necessary number on saturday and since sunday reset, i was the only one to give this story any stones. sad.

Overall Word count = 2099 on 11/25/2024. 

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As Raikou is clashing with the one-eyed dragon, the others observe a new phenomenon in the sky. A swirling vortex is happening in the upper sky where the dual attribute Rhongyminiads have been competing, the current suction force is extraordinarily strong as even the very air is being pulled in where Axel is at the center. 

The force at which the law energy is gathering onto him is staggering, as if a nebula is being formed. A mix of color, swimming past each other or turning into streaks of beauty incarnate as they flow into Axel, or more specifically the miniature world spear Axel has which is rapidly integrating with his reality marble.

With the miniature world spear he had created, his reality marble is undergoing an evolution in terms of laws and other abilities, The few pieces he was informed of early on by [Raphael], told him that the size of his world is more permanent but that means he has to take heed of how he designs the corresponding growth since it's more 'real' now. 

The second thing he was told is that should he die by any means then the small bit of Axel's soul/spirit that is linked to the world would work with Rapheal to release the reality marble as a miniature world in the open space of the cosmos. Once that happens, that fragment will then enter hibernation until they fully recover unless the reality marble world is destroyed somehow.

[Raphael] would ensure everything keeps working in the world like usual or if it needs help then it can siphon mana from the inhabitants to adjust the world's position, motion or create the necessary atmosphere to protect from solar radiation.

If Axel still retained the hundreds of tiny soul fragments from all walks of life then the many weebs or fanfic readers would pog and say, "hey, that's a pretty handy life saving ability".

Shaking himself of this possibility, he refocuses on making sure that nothing goes wrong with the laws. In the meantime, he also sends out one more person from his reality marble to help Raikou but he first has to have a quick chat with them.

"Are you sure you want to help?"

"Mhm, but it would be nice if you could strengthen me like you did miss Raikou." they simply respond with a head nod. A slight ditzy expression on their face.

"You do realize that would essentially bind you to me?" Axel warns the purple haired maiden.

Clang "Does that mean I get to stay here?" she asks with her metal hands meeting with a rushed clasp and she tries to nuzzle against them. Axel can at least understand that she isn't against the idea of staying in this village.

"Oh right, can Gorgon and the others stay here too? You haven't met my sisters but they are so nice" Tulips (Passionlips nickname) tries to negotiate for a bit more. 

"I was already going to invite Gorgon later but i don't mind, the others can come by after the battle" 

"And we don't have to pay rent right?" She asks one last question and Axel just shakes his head. He would explain how there is no official currency but he doesnt get a chance as after shaking his head, he finds himself squished by a pair of ... .jagged peaks land against his chest and a soft peck on his lips stops him from explaining.

He places a hand on her head and pushes her away before he gets distracted and pins her down here and now. That would not be good for his survival.

Axel begins to scan her for all elements of her body as he ascertains which actual divinity would be best for her.

'Hmm, seems that strength would have been the best for her but Tiona already has half a foot into it and changing it for her could very well stop her from ascending to full divinity. Wait a second ... .what…hahahaha' Axel was originally pondering some ideas but then he got the information related to her Gauntlets [Monstrous Strength]. Upon understanding how this ability works, he immediately began to laugh out loud that Tulips took a combat stance as she found Axel weird.

"Oh yes, this will be very nice." With Axel calming down from his glee and beginning preparations, he decides to give the ditzy girl a hint about her new power. 

"Alright, I found a domain that suits you very well. It definitely augments your physical prowess well but more so on the magical side.

"Ehhh. but how could a bit of magic help me get stronger to beat that?" She questions as she is slightly more resistant to magic due to having a lower affinity for it than her sisters.

"Well i found that this power should enhance your eyes mostly, though it does have other many useful abilities, for your own immediate need…..just take in …everything." His unusual pauses only seem to confuse her further, seeing no hope for him. He decides to simply get started on making Passionlips, the new Radiant Goddess.

With her gauntlets serving as conduits, the divine energy of light and concept of the sun begins to flow through her. She feels an insurmountable amount of warmth envelop her as she turns into a miniature sun. Her body and 'hands' are reforged within this heat as Tulip's eyes witness how the information of how light works and it's concepts are now attached to her. Even someone simply like her can quickly understand what hint Axel gave her about 'taking in everything'.

With Tulips to help Raikou suppress the draconic beast, he soon disappears from the reality marble and refocuses his efforts upon absorbing the final segment of laws. This is the most clustered variety as they are related to nature as a whole.

As her ascension comes to an end, Tulips finds herself outside with the 'White' hollow dragon being rapidly struck by lightning as Raikou is zooming around like a lightning bolt and with her katana, cutting apart the dragon who rapidly regenerated back to health whilst unleashing small scale ceros from any part of its body. 

It had attempted to use Sonido to dash around raikou and either bite, claw at her or release stronger ceros but she was simply too fast for anything to hit and more often than not it wound up with an injured face or shattered limb. 

As such it has relented to being a punching bag or whetstone as it unleashes a barrage of lasers at Raikou. Yet suddenly the dragon feels a new threat as Tulips lifts up one of her golden arms where the previously red magical gemstones are now colored a bright dense yellow like a noon sun, high in the sky.

The first thing the dragon feels is the heat, the raw temperature of the air around Tulips is enough to already melt a typical iron ingot and that only seems to grow as Tulips channels both her powers, one of her newfound divinity and the other of her conceptual power instilled into her arms. Arms that she had treated as a curse for a very long time as the fake immortal[1] bends the very light around her so that she can 'see' the dragon in it's entirety. She then begins to clench her metal arm. 

CRACK. The second thing the dragon feels is how its tail snapped at a strange angle as it felt a strange force begin to shrink and compress it. It can feel its internal organs hemorrhaging as they are quickly compressed within its own body. It's a strange sensation as it feels much lighter the more its body is pressed together but the sense of danger of its life ending in this very moment is at an all time high. Fear encompasses its body as it spits out a ton of blood, both as a result of it's crushing injuries but also as a way of escaping this predicament. 

It's scales open up discreetly as vats of blood begin to shoot out onto the ground, creating a relatively large pool of blood underneath it's own cube like body. Tulips is approaching the square shaped dragon which is now a proper 5 by 5 by 5 square. Her giant arms touch upon the cube and are about to bring it within her [Breast Valley] for safekeeping when she is forced to stop as she feels a sudden pain on her shoulder. She finds that a creature made of blood is biting into her neck. 

She feels her energy being sucked out of her and she loses the ability to resist momentarily from the shock of it all when the blood creature takes the white cube and sucks it into itself. 

The cube seems to have been undone as the blood creature takes on a new humanoid form with even a proper human-like face and body. Full plate armor made out of both large and small scales adorns the creature's body. A thin sword rests at it's hip

"Now that was a proper main course. As a token of my thanks for helping me reach this state. Let me have just another bite before we continue this fun." It reaches for Passionlips again with its tender but pale human white hand. 

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Alt Title: Devouring Vortex, True World, Trash & Crush, Fake Resurreccion.

Drop a comment if you wanna judge my writing or the story. Ill try to respond, especially if you're confused or anything. 

[1] I don't know if anyone really understood Gorgons and the Sakura copy background here but they arent true immortals, they are humunculi created by an immortal and thus share her image. The original power related to 'that woman' was split and bestowed between the trio of Passionlips, Meltryllis and KingProtea.

For anyone reading this, just know that the following ideas are a product of brain rot and horny. Do not try to make sense of them and understand that they were utter bullshit. 

(The following content might contain ntr, grooming or other bullshit like pokemon harems)

1: The first in the line of bs was a mix of two worlds. The original idea was that we go to Records of Ragnarok (which we still will as one of 2 current ideas for in between danmachi and fate travels) but Axel wanted to get a proper link to the humans so that he could fight on their side. Along the way he found the younger, unmarried version of Shirasagi Tsuki (otherwise known as Uzaki Tsuki), seducing her but not getting her pregnant. Allowing her to live her life like normal as if Axel was simply a dream to her then coming back in the future through a mixture of spatial magic and his 2nd magic. Locking himself onto the current world but using 2nd magic to travel through time to the future. Through that, he then returned tsukis memories and then seduced her and Hana Uzaki. 

This idea was obviously scrapped once i stopped being dumb. 

2: Another idea which followed a similar route was a Komi x GATE fic where he went for the mother then the daughter and then transitioned to GATE where we got an adult Rory Mercury through the divine ritual that Axel has now condensed (this idea was formed when I didn't think about 'shedding' the demi godhood off Axel.)

I stopped this as well though im still down to have a quick visit into GATE if yall want. Haven't seen any recommendations yet for other potential lands. 

So as a final message

The current 'worlds' which will be in between are ROR and a small trip into Warhammer for the fun of it. Screwing up canon, fighting a ton of Chaos, Imperium and WAGH. 

Speaking of WAGH, even though im a necron boi myself, I do actually slightly wanna make a WAGH fic. Any recommendations for what sites I should visit to learn more about Orks or potential areas to join that would throw me into the thick of it?


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