Echoes of the Damned

Chapter 3: Crawling Through Hell



Raelyn's breath came in ragged gasps as she crawled deeper into the tunnel beneath the slaughterhouse, the darkness pressing in on all sides. The walls were slick with something wet, coating her hands and knees as she dragged herself forward. The smell was unbearable—a mix of rot, decay, and something far worse, something that made her skin crawl.

Her fingers brushed against the walls, and she recoiled in horror. It wasn't just wet; it was soft, like flesh. She couldn't stop her fingers from sinking into it, and when she pulled them back, they were covered in a thick, slimy substance. The walls weren't stone or dirt—they were made of flesh. Some twisted, stitched-together nightmare of skin, muscle, and fat, pulsating like it was alive.

Her stomach lurched, and she gagged, bile rising in her throat as the stench grew stronger. The sound of squelching echoed in the narrow space, and as she moved, her hands slid deeper into the fleshy tunnel, her nails scraping against the sinew beneath. The ground beneath her warm, unnervingly soft, and each movement sent waves of nausea through her body.

Something moved.

She froze, her entire body tense. The squelching grew louder, coming from somewhere ahead of her in the darkness. It was the sound of something wet, dragging itself toward her. Slowly, with a sense of dread creeping up her spine, she forced herself to crawl toward, the tunnel narrowing, pressing against her back and chest as if it were swallowing her whole.

Then she saw it —a mass of writhing flesh, blocking the path ahead. It squirmed and twisted, a tangle of limbs and faces, all half-formed, fused together in a grotesque mess of skin, teeth, and bone. Eyes blinked at her from within the mass, some wide with terror, others dull and lifeless. Mouths opened and closed in silent screams, their tongues flicking out, tasting the air, as if searching for her.

Raelyn tired to scream, but no sound came out. The thing before her shuddered, and from the tangle of bodies, a face pushed itself forward—a woman's face, eyes wide and bloodshot, her lips torn back in a grotesque grin. The skin of her face peeled away as she opened her mouth, revealing jagged, rotting teeth.

"Help... me..." the voice was barely a whisper, gurgling from deep within the woman's throat, blood and bile bubbling from her mouth.

Raelyn recoiled, her back hitting the fleshy wall behind her, but there was no escape. The mass of bodies writhed closer, their limbs twitching and grasping, some with fingers fused together, others with hands that were nothing more jagged stumps. They reached for her, their touch cold and wet, like the hands of the dead. One hand, with fingers ending in sharpened bone, scraped across her ankle, tearing her skin open. She felt the warmth of her blood mixing with the around her.

The tunnel pulsed, and suddenly, she was moving—not by own will, but by something beneath her. The floor rippled, pushing her towards the writhing mass as if it were feeding her to it. The hand grasped her legs, pulling her in, dragging her closer to the gaping mouth and twitching eyes. She could feel their breath, warm and sour, on her skin, could hear the wet slurping sounds as they devoured whatever was in their path.

Her fingers scraped desperately against the fleshy walls, but they sank in deeper, as if the tunnel itself was holding her, refusing to let her go. She could feel it pulsing beneath her hands, the muscle tightening around her like a living organism. Something slimy brushed against her face, and she realized with horror that it was a tongue—long and gray sliding across her cheek, tasting her. 

Her scream finally broke free, echoing in the claustrophobic space, but it was drowned out by the sicking sound of flesh tearing and bones surged forward, pressing against her, their faces contorting with hunger. A mouth latched onto her leg, its teeth sinking into her flesh, ripping away a chuck of skin. Blood poured from the wound, and the creature let out a wet gurgling moan of satisfaction as it chewed.

Raelyn kicked and thrashed, her screams turning into frantic gasps for air. The walls closed in around her, suffocating her, the wet, pulsating flesh wrapping itself around her body. She could feel it crawling over her skin, seeping into her pores, as if it were trying to consume her from the inside out.

In a blind panic, she clawed at the walls, ripping away pieces of flesh with her bare hands, her fingers slick with blood. She pulled herself forward, inch by agonizing inch, her body trembling with exhaustion and terror. The mass of bodies shrieked behind her, their cries blending into one horrifying chorus.

Finally, her hand found the edge of the tunnel, where the fleshy walls gave way to stone. With one last desperate pull, she dragged herself out of the nightmare, collapsing onto the cold, hard ground. Her body shook with sobs, her skin slick with blood and filth, but she was free—at least for now.

But as she lay there, gasping for air, she could still hear it—the sound of wet, squelching flesh, crawling after her.


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