In The Abyss As A Toon Character

If you like the idea and want to give it a try, but you feel the writing is bad, don't worry. It has improved drastically. I wrote this in a comment for those who don't read the comments.

You can go to "Chapter 19, Dante's Divergence in a Pool," and see the difference. (Tho I don't think this will make a difference, your patience must be quite high if you are reading a 0-star fan-fic)

You can also go to chapter 44 -WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE TO DO ME THAT!"

In that chapter, you'll see how my writing improves BY A LOT!

You won't spoil anything important and you'll be able to see how I improved.

(I will also use this to clarify more things later on... Because I don't want to erase the comments in the other Auxiliary chapter)